An excerpt for a competition

Hi guys, I hope we all had a great night. WHile still working on Rosa and Francis..etc I would love to show you a write up for a competition I am going for on fan story. 

We are told to start with the sentence "Hell Found Me." This is just a bonus and it has nothing to do with When A Woman Wants. 

“Hell found me.” I screamed in my head  as I tightened my grip around the knife which slid down into his  big potbelly.  My breath was caught in my throat. I could
hear him choke, choking in his own blood. I wanted to look away but I couldn’t . Everything in me wanted him to die and I plunged the knife harder..deeper  and twisted it. I felt him grow limp, there was horror in his eyes  as he stared at me..then slowly as if in a slow motion, he was falling ..I let go of the knife as he hit the ground.

Lying in the pool of blood was my step-father, his body lay on the floor, not moving, his eyes were staring at me, expressionless , eyes open, mouth slack. He kept on choking, writhing in pain. His eyes held mine for a second as if he was trying to apologise  for  having done what he just did or he wanted to curse me for what I just did..either ways I was not able to tell and just like that he jerked and in a moment he was gone.

I knew he was dead, I could feel it. His eyes were still fixed on me but they were frozen ,life seemed to have gone out of them.  

I sighed and with trembling hands I moved closer to him, to be sure he was really dead. 

I placed a hand over his nose, I felt nothing, no air , then I sat down, trembling.

The air was filled with the acidic smell of our blood, the innocent but raw  blood of my virginity and the  caustic blood of his murder. I knew that soon the police would be here. They were always on time.

I was not going to run , fear was the last thing in my mind right now! this has gone far too long. I could still hear the throbbing from beneath my stomach. I could still feel his dirty hands all over me..I could feel him in me all over again..perhaps death would never erase the memories, but I knew he could never do it again. He could never do it to any girl again.

I lay on the floor, unashamed to cover my nakedness.  I sat, waiting, as the noise of the  siren got nearer and nearer... 

Alright, thanks for reading, I do hope I have a shot, even if i don't win it, the judges opinions will be of great benefit. Alright so I will be uploading our very own When a woman wants next.